Now, for my entry!
Title: A Night To Remember
Michael’s lips traced up Lila's neck. Her body began to shake as his strong hands wandered from her waist, down her hips, then back up just below her chest. Her nails dug into his tanned back just as he lifted her in the air in one swift motion. Her shapely legs wound around his muscular waist while her arms rested around his neck as he carried up the stairs without any trouble at all.
Her fingers tangled in his raven curls as his steel arms released her body, allowing her to fall gently to the silky sheets of her king size bed. Lila moaned as Michael’s body crashed into hers and sent shock-waves throughout her senses with every motion he made.
“Are you sure about this, Lila?” He had stopped just short of sealing the deal and was now staring down at her in a way that made her heart flutter like a thousand butterflies were locked in her chest.
Searching his golden eyes, she whispered, “Yes. I love you, Michael.” It was the first time she'd noticed the little creases around his eyes from squinting so much while working in the sun for so many years. To Lila, they didn't say he was older, it was just one more thing that made him irresistible.
Michael’s mouth crashed into hers before he could change his mind. Lila clutched the sheet as she felt Michael ushering her from girlhood into being a woman. Her nails met his flesh making him growl just as her back arched sending fireworks throughout her tiny frame.
“What was that?”
Her ice eyes searched the blackness as she listened intently for the sound that made her push him away. Rising up, she could hear the distant thudding of heavy boots meeting the hardwood floor. Closer and closer they came until finally they stopped just as the door swung open to sound of Lila's bloodcurdling scream.
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I'm on the edge of my seat! Nice:-)
ReplyDeleteooh...really nice - the hotness and the scare!
ReplyDeletePretty sexy and intense.
ReplyDeleteGreat job. I can't wait to see what happens next. :D
ReplyDeleteVery sexy, and I love the dramatic cliff-hanger at the end.
ReplyDeleteI want more, to this story. It's really good can't wait to find out who is at the door
ReplyDeleteVery, well, sexy!
ReplyDeleteI really, really liked this. Nice tension and excellent cliff-hanger.
ReplyDeleteThis is a compelling scene, but there are quite a few typos. "His strong hands wandered," not wondered. "As he carried her up the stairs" or "upstairs" not "as he carried up stairs." "Steel arms," not "steal arms."
ReplyDeleteI like this, but you need to proofread a little more closely.
Thanks everyone! I'm so glad you all like it so much!
ReplyDelete@Ellen, thanks for catching those nasty typos! (I hate those!) I typed it last night from a hand written copy. Sleepy brain = embarrassed author. LOL :)
Hey, I know how the sleepy brain thing works. I'm always doing my work late late late at night.
ReplyDeleteThis was a great scene. Very intense and loved the ending. :)
Melinda
www.melindawriter.blogspot.com
That was a great cliffhanger. I totally want more. Great job..
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Whoa! Nice! Can I say hot? Hot! Very good writing. I'm proud of you. :)
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