Sunday, March 27, 2011

Poem: Daddy Can You Hear Me?

I wrote this last night after thinking about some things.  Decided that I would share it with the world.  I hope you like it!



DADDY CAN YOU HEAR ME?
BY: Jamie Corrigan

Daddy can you hear me?
As I sit crying on the floor.
Daddy can you hear me?
I don’t see you anymore.
Daddy can you hear me?
As I call out wanting you here.
Daddy can you hear me?
Wishing you were near.
Daddy can you hear me?
As I scream out your name.
Daddy can you hear me?
When I admit it’ll never be the same.
Daddy can you hear me?
As I finally see that I am strong.
Daddy can you hear me?
Now that I’m finally moving on.
Daddy can you hear me?
As I no longer speak your name.
Daddy can you hear me?
Knowing that I’m tired of the game.
Daddy can you hear me?
As I become someone new
Daddy can you hear me?
I no longer care what you do.
Daddy can you hear me?
As my wings spread ready to fly.
Daddy can you hear me?
I no longer want to cry.
Daddy can you hear me?
As I become so free.
Daddy can you hear me?
 I no longer scream
Daddy can you hear me?

3 comments:

  1. That almost brought a tear to my eye!! Dont worry dear, there's many people out there who feel just as you do. :) Never alone. Love you!!!

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  2. Ah I love poems that sound like songs! Great job! =)

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  3. Hi, Jamie. Wow what a sad, but freeing and empowering poem. Nice to meet you and wishing you luck on your pitch coming up! :)

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