First 250 
Below you may post your first 250 words of your finished and polished manuscripts for critique.
Rules: There's only two rules.
1.) If you post your first 250 words for critique you MUST critique at least two others.
2.) Be honest, but don't be cruel. (I shouldn't have to explain what this means.)
Note: The Pitch Slam Team will NOT be critiquing these here. We will only critique/send feedback during the official rounds. If you want our feedback, please check the #PitchSlam tab for how to enter and all of the rules involved.
If you have questions, please don't post them on this post. This post is ONLY for your first 250 words and critiques. (I'm wanting to keep this clean and easy for everybody to post and reply.) Either ask on the Pitch Slam post, the #pitchslam twitter tag, or the FB group. (Or tweet us. We don't bite!)
Comments will remain open until the team posts are live. Then comments will be on moderation so ONLY the Professors/Agents to make requests/play.
Good luck!!
