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Birthday Blowout First Page Contest with Victoria Marini hosted by Shelley Watters starts today!!! Below you will find my 250 word entry. Actually, it's 257 words; but Shelley said not to stop in mid sentence. I hope that you enjoy & feel free to critique/comment!!
NOTE: I spaced the paragraphs so it'd be easier to read.
Title: The Demon Chronicles: The Black Light Of Purity
Genre: Young Adult/Horror Fantasy Romance
Word Count: 60K
Contest Entry
All of her life, Taisie Monahan knew the hollow feeling of loss. She had never experienced it before now; but she always felt it. As if a memory from another life were haunting her and begging her to find it. Find…him once again. At least that’s what she always thought and her mom even encouraged her to believe that some great love was out there…waiting to be rediscovered. That emptiness she could deal with. This…was something different in every way possible.
As she climbed out of her father’s black Lincoln Town Car, the rain felt like an icy dagger being driven into her fair skin. Her blue eyes flicked up at the ever-graying evening sky and watched as a lone raven glided across the silver clouds. Standing there in the cold winter’s rain; Taisie could swear that someone, or something, was watching her every move. The icy wind stung her face as she glanced around in hopes of catching a glimpse of her admirer. It’s just your imagination, Tais. Get a hold of yourself.
“Taisie…go up to your room and start packing,” her dad said as he tried to hold back the tears that he had been walling up all day.
She tugged at the bottom of her black cotton knee length dress as she turned around swiftly, making her brown hair fly wildly into the piercing rain. “Why can’t we just stay here?” Anger rang in her voice; but pain filled her heart. None of this made sense and her father’s decision wasn’t helping things either.